Overtime
She saunters into the room. All eyes turn to her. Her long
limbs settle into a chair. She makes it looks like nothing to wear a dress like
that. She folds one leg over the other and rests her hands in her lap. Her
fingers sparkle with jewels from her travels. She only wears one earring. It’s
so fabulous she doesn’t need two. She makes living look so easy.
Our boss starts talking. I am supposed to be writing, but
all I can do is look at her. She is wide-eyed, looking at him with her head
slightly tilted. She isn’t smiling, but she looks happy. She seems to be
listening. I try to do the same. After a while my neck hurts. I obviously don’t
tilt my head enough.
She stands and speaks. She doesn’t go to the lectern and use
the microphone; she just stands there, amongst us all, speaking to us like she
knows us. We’re all friends. Her hands often move about in front of her. One of
her rings matches her lipstick and another matches her watch. Does she know
this?
Later, she sends me an email. It’s about finance, but her
writing is so open and friendly. She should have emailed my boss, but maybe
she’s seen something in me. I start her request immediately. I’m not going
until I’ve finished.
I’m the last one in the office, but I’m happy. I’ve done a
good job and tomorrow she will see that. Maybe she’ll invite me for lunch. We’ll
become friends. We’ll go shopping. We could go on holiday together. She’d be
great to wander round markets.
I turn out the lights and stop by the toilet. Someone else
is still here and she’s in a cubicle crying. It can’t be her. I peek through
the crack in the door. It’s the boss’s fat PA with her head in her hands. Phew.
It’s not her. I turn and leave, still happy.
328 words
CRACK
1a : a
loud roll or peal
b : a sudden sharp
noise
2: a sharp witty
remark : quip
3a : a narrow break : fissure
b : a narrow opening —used
figuratively in phrases like fall through the cracks to describe one that has
been improperly or inadvertently ignored or left out
4a : a weakness or
flaw caused by decay, age, or deficiency :unsoundness
b : a broken tone of
the voice
c : crackpot 5:
moment, instant
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I loved that. I love how the voice of the narrator is so fawning and desperate. I am in awe of how you got that across. Welcome!
ReplyDeleteOoh, the narrator in this piece is rather creepy! My skin is crawling that she is still happy after seeing someone crying...
ReplyDeleteThanks for the read and your comments! It's almost bedtime over here, but I'll come and be reading you shortly.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad she was creepy and desperate, exactly what I was going for!
Cheers,
Laura
Oh, the other shoe will drop. Don't know who is worse off, the girl maintaing the facade or the one who longs for it. Well done.
ReplyDeleteWelcome, new Trifectan! Great piece to start your Trifecta career. We hope to see more of your writing.
ReplyDeleteI like sociopaths (in literature!), so this is cool.
ReplyDeleteWhat an interesting character! It was a little disarming, the way she studied the woman, and the way it's apparent that she wants to be her. This is quite an intriguing piece.
ReplyDeleteMy response to the prompt: http://www.aliciaaudrey.com/blog/trifectaprompt-crack/