The ice
clinks. Jocelyne Farrow-Montague swallows her gin and looks at us frostily. My
mother-in-law will announce her death and our freedom. Finally! We have prepared
looks of shock and sadness.
“Another,
Richard,” she orders. Oh, she plays the dying old lady well. Richard runs off;
I smile sympathetically.
“So,
your test Mother?”
“I have
the results.” She takes a sip, eyes closed.
But
wait. The lines around her mouth are twitching. Her colour has returned! How
could we not notice? There’s always a sting in the tail with this woman, she
was supposed to –
“I’m in
remission, Darlings.”
We sit,
shocked and despondent, trying to smile.
100 words + prompt
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I need to practice swallowing my gin and looking at people frostily. Love the visual.
ReplyDeleteTotally! Haha - thanks for the read and comment.
ReplyDeleteLaura
Now that really is a sting in the tail. I love her name.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sally... I won't divulge who she is based on!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the read,
Laura
I enjoyed this, all too true I imagine...
ReplyDeleteNicely played - loved the last line especially!
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