tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7664527810224073342.post2678080556838013742..comments2023-05-02T04:02:45.700-07:00Comments on As the forest bird flies: Flash fiction - Valley Girls Episode 4798Forest Birdhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11296984682432477255noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7664527810224073342.post-14011744586793698952013-09-12T18:18:22.183-07:002013-09-12T18:18:22.183-07:00Ralph's all right. Doris made a good choice ma...Ralph's all right. Doris made a good choice marrying him, even if her choices in skin care are questionable. Thank you for linking up!Trifectahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12700687481057612773noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7664527810224073342.post-80747706715949125742013-09-12T07:03:25.611-07:002013-09-12T07:03:25.611-07:00Glad you liked it :). Thanks!Glad you liked it :). Thanks!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7664527810224073342.post-48817211595359363892013-09-12T02:44:45.832-07:002013-09-12T02:44:45.832-07:00There I was thinking you'd be a Doris the Drea...There I was thinking you'd be a Doris the Dreamer fan, but it turns out you're in Ralph the Realist's corner ;-)Forest Birdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11296984682432477255noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7664527810224073342.post-15161818937014934552013-09-12T02:44:08.213-07:002013-09-12T02:44:08.213-07:00Thanks for the read, Steph. I just read yours and ...Thanks for the read, Steph. I just read yours and am going to comment. It's brilliant. Forest Birdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11296984682432477255noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7664527810224073342.post-83612550645647561172013-09-12T02:43:22.442-07:002013-09-12T02:43:22.442-07:00Thanks for the read, Kymm. He's a stuckler, ol...Thanks for the read, Kymm. He's a stuckler, ol' Ralph.Forest Birdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11296984682432477255noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7664527810224073342.post-82834117571743949702013-09-12T02:42:42.934-07:002013-09-12T02:42:42.934-07:00Thanks! Great minds, great minds...Thanks! Great minds, great minds...Forest Birdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11296984682432477255noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7664527810224073342.post-40314406807611718442013-09-12T02:42:19.837-07:002013-09-12T02:42:19.837-07:00I think deep down, Doris knows she is kidding hers...I think deep down, Doris knows she is kidding herself as much as Jean... Thanks for stopping by.Forest Birdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11296984682432477255noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7664527810224073342.post-10813602405208045012013-09-12T02:41:34.234-07:002013-09-12T02:41:34.234-07:00Why thank you, Ben :-)Why thank you, Ben :-)Forest Birdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11296984682432477255noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7664527810224073342.post-78634984937415586882013-09-12T02:41:14.211-07:002013-09-12T02:41:14.211-07:00I've only published one of your comments, I ho...I've only published one of your comments, I hope that's OK!? Hehehe<br />Thanks for your kind words. Ordinary is beautiful and crazy and magical too. Forest Birdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11296984682432477255noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7664527810224073342.post-48666170122398476082013-09-11T16:54:25.819-07:002013-09-11T16:54:25.819-07:00haha I like Ralph!haha I like Ralph!Draughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09778248789422474009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7664527810224073342.post-58742468299705985412013-09-11T16:05:50.084-07:002013-09-11T16:05:50.084-07:00Doris lay her old face on her lap... great descrip...Doris lay her old face on her lap... great description! Sweet ending. Nice scene, well done.stephhttp://peopledothingswiththeirlives.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7664527810224073342.post-71939193315522265722013-09-11T14:39:34.391-07:002013-09-11T14:39:34.391-07:00Love the foreshadowed 'he didn't like chan...Love the foreshadowed 'he didn't like change'!kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7664527810224073342.post-45717724468789809532013-09-11T11:22:39.560-07:002013-09-11T11:22:39.560-07:00Ha! I liked it! We were definitely on the same wav...Ha! I liked it! We were definitely on the same wave-length on this one. Good job, mate! :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02037504425573387816noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7664527810224073342.post-86631375378101253222013-09-11T10:55:45.517-07:002013-09-11T10:55:45.517-07:00Really nice. Especially the part where she doesn&#...Really nice. Especially the part where she doesn't comment about Jean! :DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7664527810224073342.post-26954807584414583372013-09-11T08:43:43.400-07:002013-09-11T08:43:43.400-07:00I like the finish! Very well done. I like the finish! Very well done. Ben Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17985234897549353876noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7664527810224073342.post-5595442168015392432013-09-11T08:37:39.522-07:002013-09-11T08:37:39.522-07:00I loved how you described the peace that her routi...I loved how you described the peace that her routine brings to Doris. I also appreciated the humorous reality from Ralph. While I am not old, this is a very familiar scene! Great job taking an ordinary moment and making it more. Lady Harveyhttp://anecdotelove.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7664527810224073342.post-90486739304381386322013-09-11T07:51:10.943-07:002013-09-11T07:51:10.943-07:00THANK YOU.
Means a lot because your piece I read ...THANK YOU.<br /><br />Means a lot because your piece I read today was awesome :-)Forest Birdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11296984682432477255noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7664527810224073342.post-47471162357079488812013-09-11T07:44:23.877-07:002013-09-11T07:44:23.877-07:00"Likes a peeled apple skin that winds back in..."Likes a peeled apple skin that winds back into the perfect fruit." How resonating! Enjoyed reading.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com